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Angel in Narcosis
By metaphormachine
The softness
of the narcosis
a flourishing
angel rose
beyond a scent vest
normal case man
disappeared.
& no one saw me
climb the hills
bodies to smell
harvest reap
seed must be.
& nobody's tryst, cell
narcosis loops
dungeon, guards, resonance
talon, flotsam, rituals
angel gates hell.
& they gather
the angel gray haze
it looks like emulating
thy stunning soft
coma house
peaceful soft an angels game
singularly floating target
here—in your head
Only just
in your head.
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Copyright 2013 metaphormachine
Author's Note:
Poem 12 - Book 8 of 15 - Angel in Narcosis -Comments on "Angel in Narcosis"
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A former member wrote:
like experiencing muted horror on acid. your head is becoming a halo blur. this has an ancient tongue, a dark staircase to descend. it parts itself down the middle to expose innards od roots of light.
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A former member wrote:
Interesting, truly interesting... Good write, friend.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2013, metaphormachine
(133)
wrote:
Hmm, a praise, a line & words of Satan & a real goddess are very pleasant & cosy ... this is surely an additional motivation to continue create my writing and poems ... composed & inspired of the hell & maybe from heaven ... That's it! Thanks! Also here, with you as censor, critic & reviewer it is a great honor for myself ... :)
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A former member wrote:
I really enjoyed the imagery here, well done.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Oh, thanks, new words of a new poet here ... welcome to DP & your comments are also always warmly welcome & an honor for me ...
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A former member wrote:
I think i agree with SS.. Nicely done sir, thanks for sharing!
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On Thursday, January 24, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Miss TWiiSTEDAnGeL, thanks for your praise & commentary ... it's a new honor for me & I'm glad to have a new charming female reader ... :)
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On Wednesday, January 23, 2013, deathndismay
(93) wrote:
A write as mysterious as the entities spoken of.. Very intriguing.. 10/10 Thanks
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On Thursday, January 24, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Dear dm, entities are a good definition & again you comment very poetical ... & again the full score ... I'm very happy about this & also about your comments ... Thanks!
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On Wednesday, January 23, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Screams of drug induced sexual fantasies that the muse is indulgent off, definitely a sexual stirring upon reading this. X
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On Thursday, January 24, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Stephi, you put me also in narcosis & take hold as a drug because you really see in all my composed expressions & poems sex & eroticism. But it's amazing because the poems in which you comment, have indeed mainly in connection with a woman & sex been written. Somehow, you are reading this probably actually between the lines. That I find beautiful & thank you for your words & lines! :)
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