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The Storm
By Kittichoo
Tears,
They're the symbol of who I am,
What's inside and how I feel,
Rain,
A sympathy for my pain,
Sounding for my comfort,
Thunder,
Something to over-ride it all,
An angry rush,
So there's something else,
Lightning,
Answering the darkness,
Shattering the world,
Giving it meaning,
In pain,
My tears,
All that's left of me,
At the end of each storm,
The puddles
of worthlessness...
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Copyright 2003 Kittichoo
Published on Monday, August 4, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, September 19, 2004, knightmirror
(426)
wrote:
*lightning answering the darkness*...brilliant line in a phenomenal write....****-knight
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Mother nature makes for wonderful poems...but often just how well a work conveys the meaning in relation to her...is all in the hand that weaves the words together. I think you've done an excellent job in this. You guided us through the maze of the start
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
and stop of the uncontrolled with crystal clarity. I like this. ~JMDW~
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A former member wrote:
great peice of work, it holds a special deep meaning to it great stuff keep it up
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A former member wrote:
A beautiful and graceful way to describe your emotions metaphorically, a lovely poem; I enjoy reading it. a_o_h
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On Monday, August 4, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
tears are not worthless and never think that u or ur emotions are either. this is a great write. never stop
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On Thursday, August 28, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
I'll go with Aurora on this one she's got it right, nice piece
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Kittichoo
(37) wrote:
Sometimes it's just how I feel... especially after any breakdown... I agree, I'm probably not completely worthless but I am when I give up...
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A former member wrote:
this is bitter but beautiful. well written.
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