Better Man

By gearhead

How can i be a better man?

Will you come to me

Take my hand

Ill prove to you

I'm a better man

Some day soon

You will understand

What i do, its all for you

To be a better man

Through and through

The life I'm building

All that i do

To be a better man

Just for you......

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Published on Wednesday, December 5, 2012. Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Better Man "

On Tuesday, December 11, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693) wrote:

lovely declaration. the words were so heartfelt
A former member wrote: This is very sweet and a heartfelt poem. I feel like a girl would lucky to have a guy like this. The rhyme was nice and consistant. Other than a few grammar errors, really nice.
On Saturday, December 8, 2012, Markus Darkscribe (60) wrote:

You seem to be going thru some stuff. It's good you can write about it sometimes it helps and you may come up with some ideas to improve yourself. of suggestions from others Good luck dude
On Thursday, December 6, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

Structurally perfect and a simple thought well-said, but so many women seem to get glassy-eyed with only promises, sadly. Gotta keep trying, cheers!
On Thursday, December 6, 2012, Nehema (958) wrote:

If only all men strived to be 'better men', but then I'm in a jaded sort of mood... You are a good man gear, this was a sweet read - XXOO
On Thursday, December 6, 2012, gearhead (19) wrote:

i was inspired after talking with you last night, had to write something like this to describe how i was feeling