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Better Man
By gearhead
How can i be a better man?
Will you come to me
Take
my hand
Ill prove to you
I'm a better man
Some day soon
You will understand
What i do,
its all for you
To be a better man
Through and through
The life I'm building
All that i do
To
be a better man
Just for you......
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Copyright 2012 gearhead
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On Tuesday, December 11, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(700)
wrote:
lovely declaration. the words were so heartfelt
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A former member wrote:
This is very sweet and a heartfelt poem. I feel like a girl would lucky to have a guy like this. The rhyme was nice and consistant. Other than a few grammar errors, really nice.
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On Saturday, December 8, 2012, Markus Darkscribe
(60) wrote:
You seem to be going thru some stuff. It's good you can write about it sometimes it helps and you may come up with some ideas to improve yourself. of suggestions from others Good luck dude
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On Thursday, December 6, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Structurally perfect and a simple thought well-said, but so many women seem to get glassy-eyed with only promises, sadly. Gotta keep trying, cheers!
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On Thursday, December 6, 2012, Nehema
(959) wrote:
If only all men strived to be 'better men', but then I'm in a jaded sort of mood... You are a good man gear, this was a sweet read - XXOO
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On Thursday, December 6, 2012, gearhead
(19) wrote:
i was inspired after talking with you last night, had to write something like this to describe how i was feeling
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