South on Route Detroit
By Michael
Our convoy pushes South past Abu Fayyad and
into Al Samir
along the tourist road ,
That long dry route
east of the Diyala river
between Baghdad and Baquba
Where shepherds wander through sand
like Ghosts on the dim horizon
With the voice
wailing from the minarets
Of the Al-salaam Mosque
I am pacified for
a moment at the thought.
That when
the floor beneath me
Shatters
Giving way to a flurry of fire
and shrapnel
I would never
see it coming.
Neither would I have time to pray
for forgiveness
nor remember
the Cooing smile my newborn son gives me in the morning.
Because any moment now
I might be thrown screaming from
this
gun turret
to the cracked dirt
mounds in a
slumped over pile
of blood
and Charred Skin
Driving South
Along the broken concrete
Author's Note:
Wrote this at a patrol base in Diyala Province back in 08' during my first tour in Iraq.Awards
Comments on "South on Route Detroit"
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On Tuesday, December 31, 2013, Leineco
(59) wrote:
I have to say, this is one of the best I have read here in a long time. It is a very compelling read and held my attention fiercely throughout. Very nice work! (And I thank you for your service in protecting me and my country)
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A former member wrote:
thank you for your service, and this beautiful poem. Brings back memories!
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On Monday, December 30, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
excillent soldiers eye view
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On Wednesday, December 12, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
I am totally lost for words why you aren't published I would so buy your poetry
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On Sunday, November 16, 2014, Michael
(15) wrote:
Thank you so much. I would like to be published but in all honesty I would rather give it away for free. It is therapeutic for me to write about my time in Iraq and Afghanistan.
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On Thursday, December 6, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...nice write, from the perspective of combat...