eyeliner (repost)

By King_Crazy_Dave

I’d like to give you eye liner
Fist clenched and tensed like
Sarcastic scars caustic cast in mold
Then broken
I’d like to strip you skin first and
Watch your gears spin thin winding
Fragile, yet agile footfalls of youth
That walk, catwalk
the line of empty pocket or empty soul
guilt leaks through pores and the bags
under your eyes

under your eyes I’d like to show you
compassion
by the jaw, and slam you skull first into what you are not
so maybe it would stick


I don’t crumble around the edges
you’ll never brush my dust off your skin
I’d like to give you eye liner, darker than your own

With my hands.


Run that beaten path
I’ll be the monster
And the tree’s root you lose grace and trip on

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Copyright 2012 King_Crazy_Dave
Published on Sunday, September 9, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: This poem actually has a meaning to me. It's so well written, beautiful to say the least.

  • A former member wrote: Perty badass Dave... Very visual and intriguing. ^^

  • FindAgentX On Sunday, September 30, 2012, FindAgentX (31)By person wrote:

    "under your eyes I’d like to show you compassion by the jaw, and slam you skull first into what you are not so maybe it would stick" it always sticks. though maybe not the way you envisioned. i crumble in these words. powerful enough without physical blows.

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, September 29, 2012, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    I'm so glad you reposted this.... It sticks under my fingernails in the craziest way.... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: ..What can I say. You know how to use your words with seduction, talent, and passion, whether it is about violence or love or the past in general. Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Monday, September 10, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...professor of life lessons at the school of hard knocks...

  • MikeShank1989 On Monday, September 10, 2012, MikeShank1989 (92)By person wrote:

    This felt like band aid adhesive of my prefrontal cortex. Well versed.

  • A former member wrote: "and slam your skull first into what you are not/ so maybe it will stick." this reminds me of myself in my weaker moments. thank you for this.

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