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Thirst
By archangelmichael
What i feel
no one can know
The thoughts i have
no one will guess
The compulsions i resist
should never exist
So many thoughts
of death
So many dreams
drenched in BLOOD
Innocent lives taken
without cause
There is one voice
i must obey
His name
i cannot speak
One need
i must fulfill
DRINK !
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Copyright 2012 archangelmichael
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A former member wrote:
Excellent flow of rhyming going one here! I think this poem is the perfect way to describe what an out of control vampire might be thinking. Doesn't want to hurt anyone, but can't help but listen to this obsessed and thirsty voice inside himself, persuading him. Chilling, yet sad at the same time. Bravo on a wicked vampire piece. =)
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A former member wrote:
Great work (: wonderful flow and rhythm to the work(:
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A former member wrote:
Great flow to the poem, and the lines really complemented each other.
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On Wednesday, August 22, 2012, Devilish
(2658)
wrote:
I am an alcoholic .. I must full fill the need to drink as well . another hello to you ,..
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