+Your Predator+

By ExaCute

o, a desire that fills me
the need, the want for moreĀ 
a lust for something
no mortal would lust for
a crimson stained apple
could be the cure
just a bite
is all i'd ask for
your essance
your soul
something all mortals hold
in your vains is said to have
liquid gold
you tease me
you taunt me
you say you don't fear me
when your eyes have the truth
you've already been sold
to taste you
to know you
though i have never met you
you've given me more
then all the lovers i've had befor
with just this bite
a vampires kiss
your life will be no more
be my pray
and i'll be the predator

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Copyright 2012 ExaCute
Published on Sunday, July 29, 2012.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

eh not my best but i've been struggaling with my writing x.x
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  • A former member wrote: Wicked! I can honestly say how perfect of a vampire poem this is. I just love how smoothly the rhymes just flow. This sounds both chilling, yet oddly sweet with the prey and predator line. Somehow romantic in the vicious sort of way. Anyways, awesome poem. You're vampire pieces really do rock! =)

  • Devilish On Sunday, July 29, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Your doing great beautiful... Definitely .. I'm proud of you . much love ... Scholar

  • ExaCute On Monday, July 30, 2012, ExaCute (37)By person wrote:

    much much love

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