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Unhappy Ending
By Rebel_Angel
My life is like a
twisted fairytale.
The frog price
always ends up
with the bitch.
My price rides
towards my hell hole
( I mean castle)
on his fat ass
( I mean overweight donkey).
I run out
in false hopes,
but once again,
my life has an
unhappy ending.
This is by a friend of mine... Her name is Ashley but we all call her Abby.
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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Thursday, July 24, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on " Unhappy Ending"
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A former member wrote:
This poem actually expresses the realism of the "fairy tale". It's not always going to be perfect... and no endings are happy. Otherwise why would it end? Well done, Abby.
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221)
wrote:
That was quite entertaining Abby! - Kryz
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A former member wrote:
interesting.
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A former member wrote:
very nice. . it really like this it is different and very well done!
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On Friday, August 15, 2003, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
I like it....
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
hey everybody it's abby the one who wrote this. it will be on my account soon, so come read my stuff. my screen name is Abbyernathie
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, finaldestiny
(74) wrote:
awesome very original my props!!!
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On Thursday, July 31, 2003, ColdScaredAlone
(80) wrote:
ha, tell her i said it's awesome
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On Friday, July 25, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
abby wrote this!!? tell i say i like it hehe it makes me smile and laugh
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A former member wrote:
i like the way you compare things! pretty cool!
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
you kick ass, abby! bravo!!
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
cute. good work.
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, Clementine
(121) wrote:
this is a slight differnt twist on an old unoringal sob theme of poetry
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