Unhappy Ending

By Rebel_Angel

My life is like a
twisted fairytale.
The frog price
always ends up
with the bitch.
My price rides
towards my hell hole
( I mean castle)
on his fat ass
( I mean overweight donkey).
I run out
in false hopes,
but once again,
my life has an
unhappy ending.

This is by a friend of mine... Her name is Ashley but we all call her Abby.

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Published on Thursday, July 24, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on " Unhappy Ending"

A former member wrote: This poem actually expresses the realism of the "fairy tale". It's not always going to be perfect... and no endings are happy. Otherwise why would it end? Well done, Abby.
On Monday, September 1, 2003, Crystal Passion (221) wrote:

That was quite entertaining Abby! - Kryz
A former member wrote: interesting.
A former member wrote: very nice. . it really like this it is different and very well done!
On Friday, August 15, 2003, blackdarkness (227) wrote:

I like it....
On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie (61) wrote:

hey everybody it's abby the one who wrote this. it will be on my account soon, so come read my stuff. my screen name is Abbyernathie
On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, finaldestiny (72) wrote:

awesome very original my props!!!
On Thursday, July 31, 2003, ColdScaredAlone (77) wrote:

ha, tell her i said it's awesome
On Friday, July 25, 2003, Aurora_Light (472) wrote:

abby wrote this!!? tell i say i like it hehe it makes me smile and laugh
A former member wrote: i like the way you compare things! pretty cool!
On Thursday, July 24, 2003, Sky Singer (153) wrote:

you kick ass, abby! bravo!!
On Thursday, July 24, 2003, SnowQueen (59) wrote:

cute. good work.
On Thursday, July 24, 2003, Clementine (121) wrote:

this is a slight differnt twist on an old unoringal sob theme of poetry