Untitled and Undecided

By katlady121690

My warm heart turned blue, when I realized I lost you.
Lungs exacerbated from crying, from the regret of all the lying.
Every movement I make trembles with fear; fearing only, I lost something so dear.
If only I could find some way I could take all your pain away, just to replace it with a brand new day.
I caused way too much dismay, please believe me I never wanted it that way.
Now the odds are all against us, and I don't know what to do.
All i know is I can not stop loving you.


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Copyright 2012 katlady121690
Published on Wednesday, May 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • prodigy789 On Thursday, June 21, 2012, prodigy789 (31)By person wrote:

    I never realized you could write this well my friend?

  • katlady121690 On Wednesday, June 27, 2012, katlady121690 (19)By person wrote:

    thanks trav it means a lot.

  • Devilish On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Awee. so sweet and different from the norm.. hello there you.. welcome to darkpoetry. make sure to roam around and read others as it will bring them back to you as well... if you eva need anything i'm a click away.. Scholar

  • LostInDarkness On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, LostInDarkness (31)By person wrote:

    great write, it was wonderful. welcome to DP.

  • katlady121690 On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, katlady121690 (19)By person wrote:

    thank you very much. 'tis my first write in years and years. really appreciate it.

  • dwells On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Simply bueautiful, and I had to read it slowly to understand the skill used to construct this classic verse and flow. Welcome to DP and feel free to roam and comment! Cheers.

  • A former member wrote: Loved it, great piece.

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