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Untitled and Undecided
By katlady121690
My warm heart turned blue, when I realized I lost you.
Lungs exacerbated
from crying, from the regret of all the lying.
Every movement I make
trembles with fear; fearing only, I lost something so dear.
If only
I could find some way I could take all your pain away, just to replace
it with a brand new day.
I caused way too much dismay, please believe
me I never wanted it that way.
Now the odds are all against us, and
I don't know what to do.
All i know is I can not stop loving you.
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Copyright 2012 katlady121690
Comments on "Untitled and Undecided"
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On Thursday, June 21, 2012, prodigy789
(31)
wrote:
I never realized you could write this well my friend?
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On Wednesday, June 27, 2012, katlady121690
(19) wrote:
thanks trav it means a lot.
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Awee. so sweet and different from the norm.. hello there you.. welcome to darkpoetry. make sure to roam around and read others as it will bring them back to you as well... if you eva need anything i'm a click away..
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, LostInDarkness
(31) wrote:
great write, it was wonderful. welcome to DP.
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, katlady121690
(19) wrote:
thank you very much. 'tis my first write in years and years. really appreciate it.
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Simply bueautiful, and I had to read it slowly to understand the skill used to construct this classic verse and flow. Welcome to DP and feel free to roam and comment! Cheers.
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A former member wrote:
Loved it, great piece.
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