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Grammar Lesson #1
By cadymae
In the story line you are writing
about the beautiful people
you see
don't forget to write in truth.
But you don't
know the truth.
You ought not make it up
But time is of
the essence
you need to move on so
The beautiful becomes
good
Good is now shorthand
in your plotline for good-looking
yet they are not the same
Kindness might not even be GOOD
the first rule is to not write
unnecessary plotlines created
with short-hand misdefinitions
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2012 cadymae
Published on Thursday, May 3, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Grammar Lesson #1"
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168)
wrote:
...this is certainly aimed at the integrity of all writers...words to hold, to remember...
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, cadymae
(73) wrote:
Much thanks for your kind comment. :)
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, haunted
(849) wrote:
great poem, i think in poetry for me anyway i have guidlines but no rules. i just write without being to critical. how my reader sees it, is a language in itself. its the eye of the beholder, its how its interprited that matters to me. thought provoking. and i really dont know what the hell im talking about. but i leave you with the comment that your poem is awesome!
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, cadymae
(73) wrote:
I liked your ramblings. I've been staring at the screen wondering why I'm doing that 3 lines then 1 then 3 again thing. Every now and again the words or message seems to want that shape. but I don't think about that when I write. I just write. I think all the rest of the time. :)
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Good is now shorthand in your plotline for good-looking yet they are not the sam.. freaking priceless.. hello there you .. i love this.. so very short yet hardcore with a lil soft twist.. sweeeet...
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, cadymae
(73) wrote:
tnx lady! the rest was written around that specific line. sometimes they land in my head fully-formed.
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