Shatter the Superficial Mind

I’m an empty hull

Like a broken porcelain doll

I just left the real me on the shelf

Collecting dust of forgotten dreams and hopes

Pushing them to the back on the room hiding from the world

Seeing is deceiving

But dreaming is believing

The tears falling doesn’t mean I’m losing

Because everyone is hurting

I’m an empty hull

Of hopes and dreams

Begging to break the glass and to be free

Shatter the superficial mind of this heaven

Seeing is deceiving

But dreaming is believing

The tears falling doesn’t mean I’m losing

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.

Published on Thursday, April 12, 2012. Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Comments on " Shatter the Superficial Mind"

On Thursday, April 12, 2012, dwells (4284) wrote:

Some unique and pensive lines have you penned to create this collage, nicely done and well wrought work. Good luck with that glass ceiling, cheers!
A former member wrote: We start out with great hopes and expectations but sometimes we get dragged down and lose our way. Don't let the dust gather, set yourself free. This is a plea not to let life slip by like an empty vessel. Nicely written.
On Thursday, April 12, 2012, Devilish (2657) wrote:

You sweety are quickly becoming a fav.....