Lamentation
By nefarious_infidel
I looked outside the window
Fog cleared up to grace the night
Like things that are illusions
Liberation is a mirage for my eyes
Through walls that concealed all lies
That which I've hidden is revealed
Demons,seed of my own sin
Ecstacy the root of all my woes
Many have followed these paths i carved
Adorned in the libations of impurity
Inhaled the breath of death
Never giving a chance to serenity
The light has always been a worthy foe
And i've chased myself off to dark realms
Now dying in the absence of light
Dreams are that which made me sane
I get up and start running towards the light
With every second its closer in sight
Sudden sharp pain pierces my flesh
Constantly growing in hate.
With all my might i try to break free
But these shadows pull me back
And as i went far from redemption
I was imprisoned in the dark void,perdition........
MY DEMONS, THEY'LL NEVER LET ME GO......
Comments on "Lamentation"
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, nefarious_infidel
(11) wrote:
i am one who doesnt take any offence when criticised and i will definitely keep dwells' advice in mind next time i write something of that sort. Thank you
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Demons don't seem to like to leave once they've gotten comfortable.. I know all to well, at the same time i just don't feel right without em.... =).. Your alright and it came out great.. dwells is an AWESOME poet and truly is only tryin to help.. Don't take it in a bad way he means no harm.. you should definitely check out his poetry.. believe me when i say that whatsin my head doesnt always come out that way.. Usualy it comes out alot more vile....=).. I'm not everyones forte but i kinda like reading my illness....=)
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On Tuesday, January 24, 2012, nefarious_infidel
(11) wrote:
Thank you for pointing out the flaws. Uhm it sounded way better in my mind but the output wasnt even close to that.
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On Tuesday, January 24, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
This was going really great until you got up and started running and then some pain pierces some flesh - don't believe the rest of the finish was worthy of the earlier stanzas that I enjoyed very much. Perhaps the hour was getting late as you progressed? Welcome and cheers!
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
WOW dwells.. just... wow.........