Candle light

By damien6102

 A celebration breaks the silence of night
King and queen host by brief candlelight
Honored prince and peers join in happy delight
Before an angel falls from heaven's hight
Plunged into hell and tainted by blight

But hell hath mercy and binds him with light
The angel rebirths, made feignedly right
Yet visions of demons will perverse his sight
And begin to destroy with dark sickly might
All while old sins keep old sinners contrite

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Copyright 2011 damien6102
Published on Thursday, December 15, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Loved it...=) A veeery nice poem, yessir.

  • Ladyhawke On Thursday, December 15, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Yes, listen to dwells. He is the man. As for myself, again, breathtaking. You painted such a vivid picture, such a raw and tragic, yet, somehow beautiful scene. You have my attention. And my respect. And all this, and you're so new here. We're gonna love you lol. Really though, great job. Keep it up.

  • Devilish On Thursday, December 15, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Hell yeah.. And that's a hell of a compliment coming from dwells... Hello there and welcome to Darkpoetry.. Scholar

  • dwells On Thursday, December 15, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Last line was epic as they say, thanks.

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