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Drip
By finaldestiny
the blood trickles down
blinding to our eyes
it captivates our essence
leaving us staring for eternity
slowly as we watch
the blood slipts
like a flowing river
the majoirty continues
part of the river
drips down to earth
where it will dwell
till it shrivels up and dies
the drip cut off from the rest
leaving nowhere to go
alone is now the destiny
forever shall it remain
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Copyright 2003 finaldestiny
Published on Wednesday, July 9, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, August 16, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358)
wrote:
you make beautiful pieces of work...I specially love the simplicity and elegancy of this one...nicely done.
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On Thursday, July 31, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
Bea-ut-if-file wright. Teak and amber. Heavy. Awsome read. [D&A]
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
awesome write, the essence of life brought to breath in a few stanzas... very well done...~Velvet~
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
I like it...well done...I also love blood....hehe
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