Give It A Visual
By AdorkablePsycho
I can’t take that damn sound
The click clack of the ceiling fan
It’s going to drive me to insanity
Day in and night out.
The feeling of my fingernails
On the ribbed fabric of the couch
Scraping and clawing
Like a cat .
The hard smooth force
Of my tongue ring
Rolling from side to
side
On my top lip.
The melodious patter of your fingers
On the keys of your laptop
Making me curious
As to what you are seeing.
These are the things
That make my mind stray
Getting my imaginative
juices flowing
Bringing on such amazement.
How ridiculous is it that this
Is the bewilderment of my life
And
how disheartening
That I feel there isn’t more.
Comments on "Give It A Visual"
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On Wednesday, November 2, 2011, AdorkablePsycho
(4) wrote:
Thanks to all of you. I was actually very hesitant about posting this one. Left me feeling like I lacked imagination, that is until it was finished. Sometimes things are just so still and, as simple as it may be sometimes, the stillness is all I can focus in on.
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On Wednesday, November 2, 2011, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
Surround yourself with different landscapes. Those simple moments come alive when they are framed by a mountain sunrise.
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On Wednesday, November 2, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
You are a simple person with simple needs and simplicity is the essence of beauty. So tell all high and mighty Hedonists to take a hike, well done and thanks.
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On Wednesday, November 2, 2011, WoundsLikeStars
(54) wrote:
I really enjoyed this. Finding beauty in the things around you has always been a favorite subject of mine, even when that beauty is plain.
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On Wednesday, November 2, 2011, sTr8-jAcKeT
(697) wrote:
Interesting my friend, vague & concise at the same time, nicely done; interesting twist.