Revealing My Muse
By Demosthenes
Play me the song of my silent words
Sing me my poem
where no one else can hear
Rain down some inspiration
So this pen can spill my thanks
Give your whole world to me
Because you want to
Carry your heart in /my/ hands
Because you trust them to spell out your dreams
You are my love
My obsession
My caress
My Muse
You
Because
Because every time I kiss you
It's the first
Because as comfortable
as the sofa is
I still prefer your arms
Because no matter how often I scream
your name
I'm still left broken
until you whisper mine
You are
My Muse
Because every time I curl up in bed
Unable to breathe through
::wracking sobs::
And wait for you to hold me
I remember
That you never
existed
In the first place
And suffocate.
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Copyright 2003 Demosthenes
Published on Sunday, July 6, 2003.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Revealing My Muse"
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A former member wrote:
Wowwww!! AMAZING!
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A former member wrote:
Wow. That was a perfect dark ending to a lighted piece.
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Im_going_to_cry_now
(24) wrote:
this is quite good, I really appreciate your colorful poetry
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A former member wrote:
Lovely...I know this so very well...evocative piece...the range of emotions applied to this one rang so true to my heart. Bravo, dear.
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A former member wrote:
Great line,Butterfly..xxx...
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A former member wrote:
oh wow...that ending really got me.This is so emotional."Rain down some inspiration so this pen can spill my thanks"
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On Sunday, July 6, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
Ohh, I like this, very nice. An obsessive piece with moments of desperation and adoration and desire and loss . . . great job.
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A former member wrote:
Awe, that is such a heartfelt poem, im all teary eyed :*(
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On Sunday, July 6, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
That was cutting-edge deep, and so...honest..I absolutely Loved it. I will be sure to read more..~Velvet~