.Unreliable Narrator .

By Corinthian






Remember
only her verse
for she has changed:
quite a bit
all grown up and pissed

.Stainthorpe
Harlot 
shining eyes  like
deepavali light 

:go:
:drop :
your:
little:
:life 
     like a falling man 
        



pray
to me your
revelations
of seventeen
while you
put your perfect hands on me ...
 

for seven streams
you will be mine until I
am fucking sick of you
and I replace  you
with:
violins and wine
and 
 I will
never:
ever
close my eyes

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Copyright 2011 Corinthian
Published on Saturday, October 22, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • whisperingwalls On Sunday, October 23, 2011, whisperingwalls (210)By person wrote:

    for seven streams you will be mine until I am fucking sick of you and I replace you with: violins and wine normally poems and vulgarity don`t mix for me, but in this circumstance it gave the piece power and was in good taste. Love the refuge of violins and wine... It painted the picture of a late night trying to forget.. and thats what poetry is all about, a perspective. enjoyed this alot

  • Devilish On Saturday, October 22, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    YES!!!! There's the queen... I love it!! Scholar

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