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Old Man
By soloiq
Is that for me?
The Old Man said
No I replied
Stay in
your bed
You had a chance
to get your own
it's
not for sale
or even loan
Sure you had one
where'd
it go?
He said it died
...I said I know
How it
would shine
only took hope
then the strength
he needed
to cope
As mine fell to the floor
having lost it's gleam
I turned and left
the Old Man my Dream
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Copyright 2011 soloiq
Published on Friday, September 16, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Old Man"
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A former member wrote:
Really made me think...
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On Wednesday, September 21, 2011, Devilish
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wrote:
How the hell did I miss this? I love it! U are a genuis.. The ryhme and delivery are always perfect.. Thank you very much for your comments sir....
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On Friday, September 16, 2011, dwells
(4284) wrote:
What a remarkably nice and genuine poem; I am impressed and inspired and can't believe I'm the first comment!
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