Monday Evening

By dark_sister

He told me he liked big white women,
asked me if I dug chocolate,
offered me his joint,
this stranger on High Street,
broad daylight,
my arms heavy with groceries,
just trying to make my way home.
No make-up, dirty jeans,
I was just wandering through
my early evening dreams,
having trailed through the dust
in a dark antique store,
and then crossed to the corner market,
all hazy and full of me,
swimming in my head.
I was kind to him as I kept on walking,
didn't meet his eye but smiled,
because I knew he meant well.
I winked and thanked him,
and he told me to be good.
"Don't kill nobody, girl."
Don't kill nobody.
Sometimes I wonder if
I'm the only thing
keeping my little corner of the world alive.

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Copyright 2003 dark_sister
Published on Tuesday, July 1, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I think everyone has their own little corner of the world, but the sad part is, many people don't bother trying to see what another person's corner contains. Nice read! -SP

  • GothicBlack On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    Yes this is a very different way at looking at everyday numbing chorus. i liked it. It spoke to me, i suppose you could say. ~gothic~

  • Jonas On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    you twist your every day into something that catches my eye like a spark from a lighter in the night, across the way, your little corner of the world is ordinary and arcane in the most beautiful ways

  • A former member wrote: oooh,i really like this.I agree that its different.Great..xxx...

  • nell On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, nell (270)By person wrote:

    good read=)

  • A former member wrote: different... i liked it. very nice last three lines are great

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