It Was Beautiful

By TyrantAvDetForbannet

It was beautiful, quite a sight to behold
the dark coast of waters, erie over embers
over these waters, a lone crow screech
come to me dark spirit, human come to me

I felt such strength, and the waves pulled at my feet
i said with much intent, i will swim to thee

and gently swift with wings and feather's fleeing
I step closer still into waters pulling
but there was no need for me to strain
for i was healed of every ache and pain

what a blessing one could be bestowed
and closer still i go
The crow shifted,and  i beheld a women
siren of suffering, reached for my chest
i was lifted by her very stretch
and gazed at her for but a second
"close you eyes dark spirit" she spoke
for you and I are much the same
that's why i want to take your pain
"dont look back, but swim to where you came"

and when i crawled onto the shore
the moon lit all terrain
i stood for a second to look back

but never could I go against her word
because never have i seen such grace

what a sight to behold...it was beautiful...





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Copyright 2011 TyrantAvDetForbannet
Published on Tuesday, June 21, 2011.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I think it is you that is beautiful! Way to paint a picture with your words!

  • Ladyhawke On Monday, July 25, 2011, Ladyhawke (394)By person wrote:

    Wow. I wanna see this place! Ur descriptive powers worked overtime on this didnt they. This is so beautiful. Wow, really.

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    Thanks once again lady.

  • Devilish On Wednesday, July 6, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Wow! I should have known this would be beautiful... everytime it's awsome! I love your mind... Scholar

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    always beautiful as possible.

  • Nameless Pariah On Tuesday, June 21, 2011, Nameless Pariah (126)By person wrote:

    No. You don't have to change anything. It was perfect. Lovely poem. Majestic imagery. :)

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    I know i dont, i wrote it just the way i wanted, thank you very much >=E

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