Letter to my child

By DIATRICUS

Hello to my dearest one, who
never came to be, but, let me
tell you what I longed for

Full of strength and subtle wisdom
playful, and yet, calm with wonder
teaching me to be a

            Better Man

Now and then, you'd fall away, from
me, though knowing full-well, my
loving arms would catch you

Twenty-two or twenty three, I 
figure that's the age you'd be
had you ever been, I'd

          ...be a

          Better Man

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Copyright 2011 DIATRICUS
Published on Monday, January 10, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this is just an awesome piece of work. nicely done

  • tallygrowsome On Friday, May 31, 2013, tallygrowsome (9)By person wrote:

    A prisoner on Robin Island (many, many years after his release) said that the worst thing about it had been the lack of children. When he first held a child after his release he was so moved he couldn't speak. This reminds me of that a little, the way children can somehow spark something pure and happy, and their absence makes for a sorry existence. it always kills me a little when people tell me how old their loved ones would be if they were still alive.

  • A former member wrote: this is nice. I like it

  • A former member wrote: I loved reading this. Nice work.

  • XOCHITL On Monday, January 10, 2011, XOCHITL (40)By person wrote:

    Beautiful. I love it.

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