"Derelict"

By Grim_Sorrow

Blood stained eyes
lost within
searching
piercing this unkempt facade
violating
manipulating
devastating
painful as it may be
this emotional entropy
a mere shell drained of passion
derived of hate
such force
pleading for acceptance

understanding

to belong once more

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Copyright 2010 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Saturday, December 18, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This hits a well known tune ...........impassioned sorrow filling this delicate space that is our heart. Such beauty in you.....

  • A former member wrote: Strong writing. Pavel

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