Tree Of Knowledge
By forgoten_wolf
death greets thee with cold hands of ice
welcoming with a mischievous
warm smile of fire
a world with no torture
final peace quiet
tranquility
for eternity
the suffering vanished invisible
the illness gone for good
the pain no longer
this is my final
escape
freedom
awaiting for the one morning
where I'll never
have to meet daybreak
relief from the burning
--but--
there
is the beauty of nature only seen by pure eyes
loving sounds weaving
together forming music
can't be heard by ears clogged with dirt
no love would be felt any longer
time wasted on sweet dreams and
sleep
nothing but lies
complications a knife
cutting the
line short
a disgrace a sign of weakness
this one sin greater
of all sins
--both--
Lucifer and Jehovah
their hands stretched
out towards me
eternal death or perfect immortality
therefore
I continue suffering
threaded to the little good life can offer
unselfish this life not mine
I live for you
Comments on "Tree Of Knowledge "
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On Sunday, November 7, 2010, Wiccad
(124) wrote:
Struggle and indifference, well done.
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On Sunday, November 7, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Excellent piece, I could almost feel death's icy hands brush my cheek. The ending was also unique, choosing to suffer and turning away outstretched hands. Write on.
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On Sunday, November 7, 2010, Poetic-Realm
(253) wrote:
profound flow and a captivating, but true message. good stuff man