Imcomplete

By musicalsuicide

You always want to hold me.
No matter where we are,
Or what we are doing,
You always want me with you.

I don't understand.
Why do you love me?
Why am I so amazing in your eyes?
You look into my eyes,
Kiss me on the cheek,
Tell me everything is perfect.

I feel so dark though.
Even when you are trying to show me some sort of light.
I hold your hand.
Bite my lip.
I just deal with it.
I feel love is impossible.
Why can't I feel that way.

I want to smile like you do.
Laugh at you when you are being silly.
Feel complete passion with one simple touch.

But I am imcomplete.
Heartless.
Broken forever.
Never to know what it is like.

To feel immortal love.

I am too lost for you.
But you will still stay.

And maybe someday........................

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Published on Tuesday, November 2, 2010. Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is really just a poem I wrote in like 3 minutes.

Comments on "Imcomplete"

A former member wrote: My favorite part is that it is incomplete.
A former member wrote: Sigh... It touched me because it reminded me of when i was the one who loved the girl that couldnt love me... I like the hope at the end... and i feel so dumb saying this but I feel like I have some understanding towards that person of my past... Keep up the blissful work..
On Wednesday, November 3, 2010, Iwas (39) wrote:

Such blinding loneliness even in the face of love. But in the end a shimmer of hope? Beautiful. thank you for sharing.