Counterintuitive

By Crush_With_Eyeliner

Our sun plays
different shadows
in cycles.
Their reach
is shorter
every day.
It will
expand again.

Flying on
the ground
is not always
wrong.

It depends
where
you are.

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Copyright 2010 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Tuesday, November 2, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, November 5, 2010, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Struggling to comment because this is just so good...Another one to fire the imagination.

  • A former member wrote: I got the impression that ground flight could be entirely right somewhere in the cycle... a where that seems more like a when, maybe..... as the shadows bend around the globe, perhaps. pensive read, indeed.

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