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My Asylum
By Asylum
Morbid hallways swathed in death,
Smeared with bloodsoaked discontent,
Wrought with cacophonic lament;
This is my asylum.
Eyeless
gazes pierce the veil
That separates my mind from Hell.
Though,
thin's the shroud that shan't prevail;
This is my asylum.
Lipless, toothless, ear to ear;
These wretched grins sinewed with
fear.
Putrefaction rots their sneers;
This is my asylum.
This is where the dead don't die;
This hellion mire's where
they abide
With fleshless hands stretched toward the sky;
This
is my asylum.
Asphyxiation, let me breathe,
Lest I join
these mortuous fiends.
Purge my soul; I shall bequeath
Myself
to my asylum.
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Copyright 2010 asylum
Author's Note:
Link to part 2: http://www.darkpoetry.com/node/work/139035Awards
Comments on "My Asylum"
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On Wednesday, December 29, 2010, Poetic-Realm
(253)
wrote:
ya man I have read this before, wow haha it honestly reminds me sooo much of old school thrash/black metal bands that I'd listen to growing up. this shit is fuckin powerful, all I hear are blast beats and shrieks hahahaa.
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On Wednesday, December 29, 2010, Asylum
(7) wrote:
Haha, well i did used to be in a death metal band as the vocals, and i'd write my own shit. :)
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2010, Meadowhawk
(160) wrote:
NICE!!! Well written. Great flow.
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A former member wrote:
that is badass... love the imagery.... hell itself becomes your asylum.... the vision of the dead unable to die... fleshless hands stretched... definitely gruesome, but with a classic sound, well written, good structure! awesome, man, welcome to the valley
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A former member wrote:
This is where asylum comes from..luved ur combination of words..n inspiring..thanks for sharing.. :)
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