10:37

By Guillotine

.
wet
grass
 &
morning
chasing halos
'round our heads.
we're
breaking
free of
gravity;
gravity
and breath
.
and even
though
this world
still
turns
&
time refuses
to stop
me
&
I know
I'm not always
alright
.
.
.
you 
have
every
part
of
my
soul

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Copyright 2010 Guillotine
Published on Tuesday, June 22, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Star On Sunday, September 30, 2012, Star (879)By person wrote:

    amazing! (:

  • A former member wrote: so pretty, loved the flow of the ending. it's good to see new work from you.

  • A former member wrote: good to read your words; brings clarity to the cobwebs. .. . the ending strophe is a hope for all hearts except that it feels somehow lamenting. . .but oooo---to have someone 'have' every part of your being.......takes courage and faith.......amen.

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