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"forgotten embrace"
By Grim_Sorrow
want
need
desire
the overwhelming appetite
of lust, longing and heartache
drown ones sorrows
in words
less apt to draw tears
append ones words to bring but a faint glimmer
of hope to a once inconceivable
axiom of angst
grow to find age
as useless as the hopes of waining whispers
i love you's
and
dreams divulged in passionate embrace
it is in this way,
i awake to find not but crumpled sheets
its in this
way
i am alone
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Copyright 2010 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Friday, June 4, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
It was good. & I read your profile which was the main reason I was so interested to read what poems you had. Write on..:)
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A former member wrote:
Hit home. You stirred me. I ache with you my friend. Loved your write.... =)
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A former member wrote:
beautifully written... write on please... :)
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A former member wrote:
tragic..........but beautifull........thanks for sharing
....btw..saw your profile..you are a great inspiration for us all..never give up right...thanks .:)
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A former member wrote:
lovely. beautiful. and tragic all in on poem. simply amazing!!! ~ hdb.
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A former member wrote:
*smiles dimly gazing at my empty bed* oh the ways in which to break a heart
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A former member wrote:
"it is in this way, I awake to find not but crumpled sheets." That, sir, just made my heart ache. It's odd how one feels most caged when alone, and free when with another.
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On Friday, June 4, 2010, GraveFlower
(240)
wrote:
this is very sad,,,sheets are cold when you are alone.......i feel you ..thank you for sharing
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A former member wrote:
this swept me up in a wave of sadness..... to be alone, the gradual inertia of self....
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On Friday, June 4, 2010, Shortnlethal
(65) wrote:
i feel for you...depictison of lust always makes the heart seep when longing for the touch..amazing expressiosn ^^
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A former member wrote:
This is deep, and sad
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