By musicalsuicide

I can not take this feelin anymore
Don't say one more word
I can feel my heart explode
As you tell me these lies
I can not take it
Please let me go
This aching and stabbing in me
I want to end it all
Let me be free
Stop toying with whats really left
I want to have it back

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Copyright 2010 musicalsuicide
Published on Thursday, May 20, 2010.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • T-Nothing On Saturday, May 22, 2010, T-Nothing (49)By person wrote:

    short, sweet, and to the point. very intense write on a very emotion subject, kudos

  • ubiquitoussoul On Friday, May 21, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (409)By person wrote:

    Yeah..I can also here this being strung out with intensity ...pulling your hair and whatnot.. but turn it to music and let us "hear" you...good write..

  • Morgoth On Friday, May 21, 2010, Morgoth (57)By person wrote:

    Short and very raw, deeply emotional too. Impressive

  • StolenHearts On Friday, May 21, 2010, StolenHearts (22)By person wrote:

    Very very very good. I loves it.

  • xthexnightlifex On Thursday, May 20, 2010, xthexnightlifex (78)By person wrote:

    very poetic, would make very good lyrics, in my opinion. great write

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