Ghost
By Wiccad
Hey you, standing in the hall
Can you touch me?
Hey you, over
by the wall
Could you help me?
Hey you, please don't turn away
Can you talk to me?
Hey you, laughing and carrying on
Could
you look at me?
Hey you, singing my favorite song
Can't you see
me?
I am frightened and I am cold
And I am not sureĀ of
my head
Last thing I remember is lying in bed
Why can't I touch
or feel...is this for real?
Why is my mother crying again?
My
eyes areĀ glazed and hazy
I do believe I'm going crazy
I am standing
in the room with family
But no one here is even noticing me
I
am not sure if my thoughts are my own
Then someone passes through
me......
I wouldn't have believed it, if I wasn't really me
It's
all making the kind of sense that's not
I am alone, passed on, my
skin is grey like stone
I've been left here alone........I just want
to go home.
Author's Note:
Thank you Pink Floyd for the inspiration.Comments on "Ghost"
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
very cool W, I like ghosts... well wittten, great flow, a real pleasure to read... a fine ending, a real twist... I like this piece, thank-you
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On Monday, May 17, 2010, Meadowhawk
(160) wrote:
Neat thoughts here. Flows well. Well written.