Love Is War

By soldier

Sitting in this room again
Only my thoughts surround me
I wish there was another way
But there can never be

I've come to hate myself
And I just want to be laid to rest
Because I realy don't want to be here
I hate me for my weakness

I can't break through
Because all I am is a product of this war
And this is all I have left
I can't endure this pain anymore

Waiting in this room again
Only darkness surrounds me
The light has faded
I cannot see

I try to save myself
But I fear it's too late
I know I should not be here
Since your love has turned to hate

I can't break free
Because all I am is a prisioner of this war
And this is all I have left
I can't handle this heartbreak anymore

The tears you cry
Crimson blood running from your eyes
Stains a picture in my mind
And now I'm going blind

I can't break down
But all I am is a product of this war
And it's all I have left
I can't take this hate anymore

I'm a mime
In a box
These walls
These walls
I will always love you

I'm a maniach
In a holding cell
These walls
These Walls
I will always hate you

FREE ME
FREE ME
FREE ME
FREE ME

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Copyright 2010 soldier
Published on Thursday, May 6, 2010.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • Winter Born On Monday, August 27, 2018, Winter Born (169)By person wrote:

    Very nice.

  • A former member wrote: i could say this was deep, but i think that it is more.......write on.......~S

  • firecracker On Monday, May 24, 2010, firecracker (2)By person wrote:

    i know the feeling at times but no one can truly know how you feel though i like it

  • Shortnlethal On Friday, May 14, 2010, Shortnlethal (65)By person wrote:

    i so know this feeling..i suffer this nearly once a moment everyday..this was wonderful..lovely depictison..please come time comment on my work^^

  • foreverNalways On Wednesday, May 12, 2010, foreverNalways (39)By person wrote:

    .....im left speechless....it feels like your writing about me, because these feelings are mine to. i love the way you worded this,the flow, the passion in it. i adore this peice...thank you for sharing.

  • A former member wrote: Wow, this is deep. I love this piece very much. I know what it's like to be a product of that war. It's depressing how many people are...great work. Please, keep it up.

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