What it seems
By Miztaken4beauty
She stood in the shadows in complete surrender.
Once a strong spirit;
once a contender.
Destroyed; Only pieces remain of her soul.
Constanly devastated she will never be whole.
Her hair was
limp and her arms were scarred.
She was broken; covered in those
prison bars.
In her hand she held a blade.
She looked
so horrified and sad.
Blood fell down her battered arm,
and
she dropped the razor blade she had.
She began sobbing; the
tears started to pour.
Sobbing grew louder as she fell to the floor.
I wanted to go to her,
but something held me back.
She
watched me all the while,
as if I could give her what she lacked.
She became so hysterical she was shaking,
Everything about
her left my heart aching.
Her hands went from her side to cover
her ears.
I saw the desperation behind her tears.
Her
eyes scanned the floor
and once again graced that razor,
She
reached for it.
Nothing could faze her.
Then she touched
the blade to her arm.
She didn't care that it would bring such harm.
I reached out to her and she to me.
Blood dripped from her
first shallow line.
Shocked, I realized that she was a reflection,
and all the misery was mine!
Comments on "What it seems"
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On Sunday, March 28, 2010, T-Nothing
(38) wrote:
damn that was chilling, i was immediately sucked in, and the twist at the end was just bitter-sweet. haunting visions and a genius write. thanx for sharing
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2010, Wiccad
(124) wrote:
This is writing at its finest. The ending was perfect. Just a great piece.......thank you.