Life Sucks, huh

By charliebrown

Tonite's a nite
as good as any,
Your good times suck
and pain, there's penty.

A strudy stool
made of wood,
Not too tall,
there, that's good.

Now  place the rope,
but not to tight,
around your neck,
There, just right.

Up on your toes,
not on your heels,
is that ok,
How does that feel?

Now relax and think
of something fun,
now ain't this better
than that damned ol' gun?

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Copyright 2010 charliebrown
Published on Wednesday, March 17, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: LOL thnaks for the visual , your twisted sense of humor has reflected this well! thanks for the read :)

  • T-Nothing On Wednesday, April 21, 2010, T-Nothing (38)By person wrote:

    i totally dig the twisted humor, you have a true skill lol, thanx for posting

  • Malcholm Dark On Thursday, April 1, 2010, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    Damn straight, a rope is always good... if you don't drop just right you twist around and choke to death... could take an hour...great write, thanks

  • Qurious On Wednesday, March 17, 2010, Qurious (40)By person wrote:

    very well written :) I liked

  • Dilated View On Wednesday, March 17, 2010, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    Enjoyed the flow of this and the humorous nature you took with it as well as the detail. Nicely written.

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