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"my reasoning"
By Grim_Sorrow
I want
i need
i cant
they wont
i
desire
i deserve
they deny
i reply
i demand
they
laugh
i scoff
i defend
but they decide
and i accept
for as it stands
they have yet to be wrong
and I'm tired
of starting over
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Copyright 2010 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Wednesday, March 10, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(193)
wrote:
This is one of those perfect writes that can be applied differently for every reader. The "keep it simple" method is excellent. Can feel the angst of defeat. The last line really sums it up. Good piece.
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Simple yet complex... nice write, they do seem to never be wrong don't they.
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A former member wrote:
wow... yes.. so true... "they have yet to be wrong"... makes you think about the limits of influence and control, what is inevitable and what we can help... brilliant flow of words...
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