I'll Take You There...
By maggot death
All hope is lost.
Nothing left to do,
to say,
to feel,
or to believe....
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So, get off of the sand
to another world
where you can be yourself
and not the least bit alone.
A place of paradise
you will always
win,
always lose,
depending on what you need
what you want
what you feel.
To get away from it all
just like you wanted.
As you take my hand, I murmur
"...I'll take you there..."
The sky deforms,
twists in defiancy
as I use all of my
strength
and almost endanger
my only life
for the one I
love.
The sand draws away from beneath,
I wisper to her,
"...I did it. For you.
So go on without me,
and live the life
you very much deserve."
The wind intenses
ruining your
soft, black hair
I hold you for dear life,
she then wispers to
me,
"Stop.....I'd rather be with you"
Comments on "I'll Take You There..."
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On Tuesday, February 23, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Very cool. A visually packed poem, you do good work. thanks foe the write.
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A former member wrote:
wow... i like it so much
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A former member wrote:
Dark, yet hopeful; I really enjoyed this one.
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On Monday, January 18, 2010, maggot death
(60) wrote:
By the way....its not about Klaudia:) Let it scrach at your mind!
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A former member wrote:
well well well, who is this about? great poem though.
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A former member wrote:
wow! awwww! makes me sad that i don't have a boyfriend, lol!
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On Monday, January 11, 2010, maggot death
(60) wrote:
This is not my best of poetry, either. I have been awarded the basic postcard membership(finally), which means that I will hopefully finish my short story series, along with more amounts of other literature, including poems.