the 13th year (pt.1)
By maggot death
Lightning, and Thunder.
He was about my age, with a blade that seemed to cut through solid graphite.
I couldn't tell what He was wearing, only that I had just come downstairs,
and it was very damp and cold.
His white eyes bore straight through to me. A Fascination.
The glow of night kept his identity hiden, as he ended the life of my dearest
parents and sister. He then gave me the blade, encrusted now with the blood
of my only family. I felt the oak handle, cold with confusion and anger,
like it had been a dark part of me all along. When He found that I was
terrified, he smiled a ferocious, lying, stomach lurching grin that scarred
my life forever.
Just then the police came barging in to my house, tearing through my belongings
with utter disregard. As I looked back He was gone.....and He left me with
this blood encrusted blade, a sight to see for the police.
Jail sucks. After the incident I was sent to a Juvenile Detentiion Center
of sorts. I was immediately put into a cell like no other. An unrecognized
metal material covered the walls, and there was no bed. Luckily, there
was a urinal.
I was panicked and losing my mind, being 8 years old. I did nothing to
accept this punishment, and I was starving. I just knew that I had to take
my pictures tomorrow. I went to bed on the icy cold floor of the strange
cell.
Everything is going to be okay.
Author's Note:
this series might have an additional 10 pts to it, so bear patienceComments on "the 13th year (pt.1)"
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A former member wrote:
love it really good
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On Tuesday, February 23, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Wow, bloodthirsty. Your wording and visuals are very good. well done.
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On Sunday, January 10, 2010, maggot death
(60) wrote:
Thank you, Klaudia. It's amazing that I just came up with this in my head one day. I will add as many parts to this series as I can.
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A former member wrote:
WOOOOOOOOOOOOW. *hi5* You're very descriptive. Nice job. :)