A true bedtime rhyme

By Foreverlost28

Twinkle Twinkle little Star
How I Wonder what you are
Up above the heavens Cry
Will this twinkle ever die
For the light that shines on me
Is brighter than which my eyes can see
But when this light may go out
O how I really dont doubt
The lives of us which we thrive
Will perish in the darknesses hive
And then our souls released in the wind
Fall to dust with the devils grin
When the moon finds his twinkle gone
O how his tears will be drawn
As the rocks that nourish all along his form
Fall to the spaces deadly storm
The heavens would have never wished
For that one star to perish
If only they knew what it really was
And what that one light really does
So now the heavens can only sing
Wishing hope is what the gods will bring
"Twinkle Twinkle Little Star
How I wonder what you are"

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© 2009 Foreverlost28
Published on Friday, August 14, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "And then our souls released in the wind Fall to dust with the devils grin When the moon finds his twinkle gone O how his tears will be drawn" That's the best part.

  • A former member wrote: Sad actually , good write ,thanks for the read:)

  • Foreverlost28 On Saturday, August 15, 2009, Foreverlost28 (18)By person wrote:

    Thankyou i appreciate the comment :) .alissa

  • Moonflower On Saturday, August 15, 2009, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    this is beautiful with an underlying whisper of travesties. very very nice =}

  • Foreverlost28 On Saturday, August 15, 2009, Foreverlost28 (18)By person wrote:

    Thankyou i appreciate the comment :) .alissa.

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