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Adara Star
By Beautiful Scars
Hello beautifull daughter
Inside my womb you grow
I love you more than words
More than my need to always know
My power to articulate is nothing
Im in awe, at a loss for explanation
My love for you has me paralized
My emotions flowing with no definition
A feeling I've never known
As inside me my baby grows
You kick and tumble
My insides all full of you
Amazing, I cant believe its true
I am your mother, your protecter
I'll always give you love and sheltor
I'll keep you safe, and help you learn
Just always remember...
Raising you was a right i had to earn...
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© 2009 Beautiful Scars
Published on Monday, May 4, 2009.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, July 1, 2009, Scarrzz
(235)
wrote:
I see now what I had inferred before. This is a powerful write, about a powerful bond. May your strength be sufficient to the task, and may your daughter grow up secure in your care.
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On Tuesday, May 5, 2009, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
What I mean by "raising you was a right i had i had to earn" was my daughter was taken from me, and im fighting to get her home....
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On Monday, May 4, 2009, ebonyamore
(100) wrote:
I love the line 'raising you was a right i had to earn'. that's such simple beauty and strong emotion. gave me shivers :)
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On Monday, May 4, 2009, Equinox Asylum
(140) wrote:
I dont fully believe that children formed in the womb. They are formed in our hearts. This is a special write.
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On Monday, May 4, 2009, melodies revisited
(30) wrote:
Beautiful... And true. The bond between mother and daugher is unbreakable. Such life and love in this poem. It is so sweet. I have tears welling in my eyes. ~Melodies
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