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A thread
By palenoble
Through the plastic silence
With a nylon smile
And a hole in unconsciousness
I'm waving at eloquence
Raping ambiguity
Endearingly I'm daring
Through the deepest water
And an unstable magic door
I carry on
Dragging my porcelain head
On my volatile spine
A burned voodoo doll
An odd augury
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I carry on
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© 2009 palenoble
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On Sunday, January 18, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus
(359)
wrote:
Last 3 lines had a great sound to them, I read this with pausing between lines and loved how it played out in my mind
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On Friday, January 16, 2009, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
careful of what you think your getting on with......sometimes its a good person just intelligently hurting themselves......brilliant non-the less
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On Friday, January 16, 2009, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
Nice. "raping ambiguity" is my favorite line.
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On Friday, January 16, 2009, elisa
(1616) wrote:
much like diving head first into a blackhole -total spaghettification. nicely done.
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