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Heavy Metal Girl
By allenthepope
Heavy metal girl, the way you move just takes me in...
takes me somewhere I've never been
cause me to sin...
again...
violently orchestrating your thin body into waves of energy and things
I can't understand...
your limp stringy hair flying in perfect chaos...
your body explodes and convulses with the sick, thrash that's the reason
we're all here.
And for just a second...the music LOUDLY STOPS...
heavy metal girl spits and sweats and gives true meaning for the world
to continue........
Here comes the feed back and then
yeah___we're slamin', you're in the pit, ain't takin' no shit, holdin'
your own, and THEN some.....
your face, needing air but glowing like an angel....
fallen...and finally found her place.......
little scratch on your face, knees kind of dirty
but I'm not worthy of your wasted glance,
you're much too strong for me....
heavy metal girl___
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© 2008 allenthepope
Comments on "Heavy Metal Girl"
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A former member wrote:
Good, I like it keep wrighting.
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, BethanyBallet
(21)
wrote:
One day, i want a guy to say this about me. It couldn't have been written better...
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On Sunday, November 9, 2008, veingo
(533) wrote:
Yeah! Welcome to the vally. ^V^
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On Sunday, November 9, 2008, Fantecstasy
(122) wrote:
I solemnly wish I could find a chick who was into heavy metal.
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On Sunday, November 9, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
haha, you don't look very hard then my friend :P
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