Bad Morning

By brokenbandagedbetter

It is so easy to presume
While your own world has ground to an absolute halt
So has everyone else's
But the hustle keeps on keeping on
With or without you

I can bury myself deeper into the covers and pillows
Pull the shades and pretend that I never woke up
Why must I, when the sun hasn’t?
And the bustle keeps on keeping on
With or without me

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© 2008 brokenbandagedbetter
Published on Tuesday, April 29, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: ive ahd a few of these. captured restlessly....well done.

  • Rebel tiGer King On Tuesday, April 29, 2008, Rebel tiGer King (239)By person wrote:

    the ending....excellent -symph-

  • A former member wrote: I get that on the odd occasion, I just dont think my boss would give a shit..short and direct, nicely done

  • The Lipstick Factor On Tuesday, April 29, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (287)By person wrote:

    agreed..finishing lines outstanding..nice write

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, April 29, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    finishing lines was outstanding

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