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I’m Addicted to Death
By PaYaSiN
I’ve always been told,
“Leaves of three, let them be,”
Your lips drip poison
They just scream to me
So I play make believe
One last kiss to realize our shattered bliss.
Heaven will drip
Tears of joy when my skull splits.
As the fluids flow,
My back is covered with shadows,
Turn me over
Take a glance, leave a stare
I say nothing,
Just shooting your own reflection back.
Crisp, hollow dark brown eyes,
Feel me, inhale, exhale then release a sigh.
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© 2008 PaYaSiN
Published on Monday, March 31, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "I’m Addicted to Death"
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On Wednesday, April 9, 2008, Nixx
(235)
wrote:
i feel this. thank you and welcome to DP :D
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On Friday, April 11, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
thanks. glad to be here at dp. =D
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A former member wrote:
this is wicked shit! i loves it!
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
Thanks! I appreciate the bookmarking as well. ;] makes me feel like i've accomplished something.
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A former member wrote:
lol, you have. ^_^
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
You got me on that last line....but the whole piece was great :)
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
thank you! I really enjoyed the last line, I was actually a little confused on whether that should end it or not, but I was happy with the piece there. =]
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A former member wrote:
this IS REALLY good. they're right, tons of imagery in such a few lines.
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
Thank you. ;] I'm glad you are taking so much from it. =]
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Dig this. Excellent images created with wonderful, twisting language. Write the hell on! -Carl
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
Thanks! Your comments are greatly appreciated. =]
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Muchas gracias for posting!
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On Monday, March 31, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
I've read it a bunch of times.. great great write
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On Monday, March 31, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
Really? Well I'm glad that you enjoy it. =] Hopefully I'll be able to send some money off soon for my membership so I can stick around for awhile. ;] hah.
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Just sedn him a postcard. easy and sweet
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On Monday, March 31, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
wow, this made my mind spin. Could be awsome lyrics. Great write
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On Monday, March 31, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
thanks! i wrote this for the finding emo contest. =p It wasn't as hard as I thought it might have been (having to include certain words and such).
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On Monday, March 31, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Fitting. The ending perfectly fitting. Good luck on the contest
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