Do you hear my heart?

By thesuccubusreturns

Will we ever walk together?
Can you forgive my fatal mistake?
Every breath that I take kills me,
Because you aren’t there anymore.

They say time heals all wounds
Is this the exception?
Are you lost to me forever, my love?
Don’t you want to hear my heart?

It screams out in pain and yearning every time you’re near
Do you hear it? Do you want too?
Do you hear it break every time you’re close?
The gut churning rip as its shredded?

Do you hear the subtle catch in my voice as I stop myself crying?
As I stop my self from throwing my self at you feet,
And begging your forgiveness.
As I catch the “I love you” before it escapes my lips.

Every second I live is torture its no less than I deserve.
Watching you try to love another
Watching how I ruined your life
Wanting to help you rebuild it and knowing I cant

Listen to your heart, people say
Mine only speaks of you.
What does yours say?
Do you hear it?
Do you hear mine?
Do you hear me?

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© 2007 destroyedbylove
Published on Saturday, December 29, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • serotonin lost On Sunday, December 30, 2007, serotonin lost (140)By person wrote:

    "i catch the 'i love you' before it escapes my lips".. it's a bitter taiste holding your toungue.. i really enjoyed this.. it was beautiful.

  • italianbella On Sunday, December 30, 2007, italianbella (183)By person wrote:

    heartfelt peice..open and honest nicely done:)

  • Narcissa On Sunday, December 30, 2007, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    I can feel your anquish radiate thru this piece.

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