The saddest thing about Colorado.

By Armor for your life

I miss your touch,
I can barely walk.

But I take steps out my door
Despite these shaking knees
To find your smile.

The snow it suffocates the ground
But I have saved
A flower to place in your porcelain hands.

For now I must go
Though one day I will grow
And pull down the stars
And lay them to sleep in your spine.

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Published on Saturday, December 29, 2007. Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Comments on "The saddest thing about Colorado."

A former member wrote: I really liked the ending of this, one of best I have read in a while. Nicely done, much love ~Rich
On Tuesday, June 28, 2011, Virgils Vigil (75) wrote:

I really like the ending. Great write
A former member wrote: lovely
On Sunday, December 30, 2007, Templer (22) wrote:

Hmmm. I don't think Colorado seems like this. *Runs outside to look again* Nope. But honestly it is a great work.
On Saturday, December 29, 2007, italianbella (185) wrote:

beautifully written
On Saturday, December 29, 2007, xserratedsoulx (212) wrote:

great imagry in the last two lines!
On Saturday, December 29, 2007, Narcissa (404) wrote:

Damn - I felt this - beautiful!
On Saturday, December 29, 2007, Mylissa (845) wrote:

so lovely!
On Saturday, December 29, 2007, Niemand (361) wrote:

*sighs deeply* This was lovely...-Gin
On Saturday, December 29, 2007, Six-Out (1435) wrote:

*sigh*
On Saturday, December 29, 2007, elisa (1616) wrote:

intense dedication.....i felt this, deeply.