F*ck you
By palenoble
we haven't really been through anything
and you question my sanity
thoughts recklessly dismembered
to hell with vanity
fuck all the pretentious bullshit
i am sick and tired of all this
you don't need an extraordinary wit
to figure out
that my time spent with you
for me is bliss
i couldn't give a fuck
less than i give about the Donald duck
you bore me as much
as a naked slut's touch
crawling again in my own shit
messy tip to toe
like in some theatrical skit,
noose over my head i throw
bored to death
i thought you might have been the remedy
but ending more like king Macbeth
in the Scottish Play
not in comedy, but tragedy
go fuck yourself
i don't need you to write
all this crap
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© 2007 palenoble
Published on Thursday, December 6, 2007.
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Comments on "F*ck you"
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A former member wrote:
damn!! lol.. i like this.. and your punch to the gut style
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On Sunday, January 13, 2008, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
lovely, lovely!
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On Sunday, December 23, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
You're a treat...I love your flow, and the emotion that slips through. Outstanding passion, and intensity.
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On Friday, December 7, 2007, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
Brimming with life and bitter sweet bliss. "you bore me as much as a naked slut's touch" I love that line. It's so naughty and really drives it home. Welcome to DP!
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On Friday, December 7, 2007, j-rod
(14) wrote:
Hey. I'm New here as u know and saw the comment you left on my first poem.. I see what you've got so far and I like it.. It reminds me of rappin back in the day.. Flows and has beat at the same time.. Life stuff... Diggin it.. Nice to meet ya..
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On Thursday, December 6, 2007, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
damn...well written throughout, but that ending *grins* perfect. " you bore me as much as a naked sluts touch" damn good job.
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On Thursday, December 6, 2007, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
Quite profound. The rage is firey and lucid. I love your meter and scheme. And the reference to donald duck made me grin. - Welcome to DP