heart of ashes
By StAinedNblood
the black laces to her heart
fall like ashes in the wind
her eyes so cold
like pools without reflections
she's like a withered lost soul
missing fragments of her being
wondering aimlessly
just waiting
for a chance to catch a glimpse
of the face that took her life
he's so beautiful, and she can't resist
to give him everything she has
and she'll keep falling
left every time to pick up the pieces
He doesn't care, and she knows
but she's strangled in his grip
and he'll keep taking til there's nothing
but ashes of her heart
that are blown away by the wind
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© 2007 StAinedNblood
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On Sunday, October 21, 2007, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
this is so perfect and true. something ive seen, and been through so many times.
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On Sunday, October 21, 2007, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
i loved the last two lines, they fit in so perfectly...to love someone even though they constantly hurt you.... portrayed so well....
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On Sunday, October 21, 2007, Ozymandias
(29) wrote:
I thought this was perfectly, and tragically beautiful. "her eyes so cold like pools without reflections", loved that line.