Rape

By brokenbandagedbetter

Entering my being
without an invitation

Begging screaming pleading

Mercilessly he continues on
with every thrust I die a little

Beads of sweat dripping from his forehead
his breath in my mouth

His strength overpowering

How can I hurt and feel numb concomitantly

I sit in the bitter soaked crypt
of my distorted scars
trying to quiet the chaos within my head

those eyes
that smell
the roughness of his skin
will forever infest and disgrace me

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© 2007 brokenbandagedbetter
Published on Thursday, October 18, 2007.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Saturday, January 16, 2010, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    "I sit in the bitter soaked crypt of my distorted scars trying to quiet the chaos within my head" Jesus. This made my skin crawl a little.

  • Mithiras On Saturday, August 16, 2008, Mithiras (35)By person wrote:

    I agree with people writing crap about other peoples writing, I felt that this is a very personal writing but it reveals a lot about what people may think if they've experienced that pain.

  • brokenbandagedbetter On Friday, October 19, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter (29)By person wrote:

    slither yourself away where you fit in better as this is a site for creative individuals not poser ass losers like yourself!

  • brokenbandagedbetter On Friday, October 19, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter (29)By person wrote:

    The fact of the matter is that you dont put up any work because you dont have the capability of creating any work! I know that for people like you, you must beat down others to build yourself up in your own mind. You dont offend me, you are a worm.

  • brokenbandagedbetter On Friday, October 19, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter (29)By person wrote:

    As to "itsyourlastthought" you are a moron! I can just picture you sitting in your mommas basement with nothing better to do with yourself or your life than to try and get a rise out of people by being a nasty freak! The fact of the matter is that you d

  • brokenbandagedbetter On Friday, October 19, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter (29)By person wrote:

    Thank you guys for your kind words and encouragement! I always love to read the feadback you provide me...

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  • A former member wrote: i dunno if this was a joke or what, but i found it sorta rude and inappropriate. but at any rate, the poem was gorgeous; amazingly, brutally honest.

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, October 18, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    This was so honest and very well written. A great unflinching write. -Carl

  • Niemand On Thursday, October 18, 2007, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    I know how you feel...

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