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Rape
By brokenbandagedbetter
Entering my being
without an invitation
Begging screaming pleading
Mercilessly he continues on
with every thrust I die a little
Beads of sweat dripping from his forehead
his breath in my mouth
His strength overpowering
How can I hurt and feel numb concomitantly
I sit in the bitter soaked crypt
of my distorted scars
trying to quiet the chaos within my head
those eyes
that smell
the roughness of his skin
will forever infest and disgrace me
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© 2007 brokenbandagedbetter
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On Saturday, January 16, 2010, Dilated View
(583)
wrote:
"I sit in the bitter soaked crypt of my distorted scars trying to quiet the chaos within my head" Jesus. This made my skin crawl a little.
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On Saturday, August 16, 2008, Mithiras
(35) wrote:
I agree with people writing crap about other peoples writing, I felt that this is a very personal writing but it reveals a lot about what people may think if they've experienced that pain.
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On Friday, October 19, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter
(29) wrote:
slither yourself away where you fit in better as this is a site for creative individuals not poser ass losers like yourself!
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On Friday, October 19, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter
(29) wrote:
The fact of the matter is that you dont put up any work because you dont have the capability of creating any work! I know that for people like you, you must beat down others to build yourself up in your own mind. You dont offend me, you are a worm.
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On Friday, October 19, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter
(29) wrote:
As to "itsyourlastthought" you are a moron! I can just picture you sitting in your mommas basement with nothing better to do with yourself or your life than to try and get a rise out of people by being a nasty freak! The fact of the matter is that you d
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On Friday, October 19, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter
(29) wrote:
Thank you guys for your kind words and encouragement! I always love to read the feadback you provide me...
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A former member wrote:
i dunno if this was a joke or what, but i found it sorta rude and inappropriate. but at any rate, the poem was gorgeous; amazingly, brutally honest.
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On Thursday, October 18, 2007, carlosjackal
(3018) wrote:
This was so honest and very well written. A great unflinching write. -Carl
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On Thursday, October 18, 2007, Niemand
(361) wrote:
I know how you feel...
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