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You're the angel I knew you were
By Fading_Smile
The wind spreads your sadness like wildfire
When I'm hypnotized by your brown eyes
chocolate desire
You're truly the angel I knew you were
when you borrow the wings of the butterfly
perched on your soft shoulder
You're an angel
Birds see you and fly south in summer
ashamed, your beauty is greater
The sun is an eternal shooting star
my wish is that you lay with me forever
Be happy
On a cloudless day rain falls from the heavens
but you still struck the match that lit me ablaze
I wink as a dragonfly teases my eyes
and wake up, sweating and alone
I miss you
It was so beautiful, I'm not sure it was real
You were so beautiful, I'm not sure you are real
But after burning me the way you did
it's hard to dream of anything else
near impossible
You've spent days in my dreams
have I been in one of yours for half a second?
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© 2006 Fading_Smile
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On Friday, July 10, 2009, disposable
(105)
wrote:
each section seperately evoked a beautiful image yet seemed to flow together into one. intricate and delicate. you have some of my fav lines here. write on...
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On Friday, June 22, 2007, Mari
(425) wrote:
amazing? no something better than amazing.
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A former member wrote:
Wow, When I read this I immidiently thaught of my fiance like you where pulling the words out of my head. Damn for 17 you are truly a poetic genius. ][ ][
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
(69) wrote:
oh my god,the whole thing had a iron grip on my soul but that last line, that last line really braught it together,your amazing my dear
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A former member wrote:
god, i needed to read this today..its almost brought tears to my eyes..i have to reread this over and over again..thank you for writing this.
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On Wednesday, July 19, 2006, sIo
(926) wrote:
jesus you know how to write a sad poem.
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A former member wrote:
Intricately woven and evocative in the most heart rendering of ways. You've stolen my breath. So very well written.
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A former member wrote:
WOW, this was beatiful. I feel like this sometimes but could never explain it. I just love the way the feeling is catured in this one.
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On Wednesday, June 28, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
i wanted this poem to last forever.. like the never ending poem about a beautiful soul you'll never see.. please tell me there will be another poem linked to this soon
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A former member wrote:
this is really beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
i've read this so many times, and i can honestly say this is one of the most beautiful pieces of poetry i have ever had the privilige of reading..everything was simply perfect about this, all the details, images..just gorgeous.
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A former member wrote:
"Birds see you and fly south in summer
ashamed, your beauty is greater" & "
You've spent days in my dreams have I been in one of yours for half a second?" so dazzling and impressive. you are quite the talented poet.
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On Wednesday, June 28, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Elegant and fragile. I liked this one, dude. It was like drinking vodka and lime for the first time with someone who just keeps getting closer with every shot. "When you borrowed the wings of the butterlfly..." Good stuff, man.
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