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TOXIC!!!!
By Zhee
The decayed mind crumbles
Hollow, rusting with cocaine,
Pounding the fragile vessels
In your maggot infested brain.
Blood stained dagger screams
Murder! This hunger is a disease,
Unleashing feral impulses
Brings a god down to his knees.
Rape, kill and then devour,
Barren soul craves bloody rains,
Buy minuscule pieces of heaven
And inject them in your veins.
Parched eyes behold vacant dreams
Upon your carcass ridden throne,
Your bestial corpse cringes and cries –
Amidst the dead – you feel alone….
~when you kill all that touches you - don't ask me why you don't have friends...~
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Wednesday, September 22, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "TOXIC!!!!"
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On Sunday, October 10, 2004, thinevoicetragic
(52)
wrote:
well maybe brittany spears should change the lyrics to her song.. and use these ones because I don't think that she know's what toxic is.
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
the very last thing put on here is something a lot of people should think about
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A former member wrote:
i LOVE your work, and i really like this poem. its awesome, nice work! ive liked your poems ever since i started looking around, by the way! your way with poems amazes me
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A former member wrote:
meh, this felt like it was slamming ME , alas i am a curator of the psychadellic substances. very very well done though, even such as I can see the truth in this. *applauds*
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
awesome piece
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A former member wrote:
Another fave for me! Thanks, Zhee!
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
Wonderfu write Zhee! Very tense expression with this piece! Gotta love this one :)
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
wow, very intense. its sad that poeple do this to themselves and then expect sympathy. very nice write.
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A former member wrote:
I agree with stuart very nice
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A former member wrote:
well the title says it all..toxic; very cool..i need to learn bigger words now, and rite something good...~~~drunk trag guy..later
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