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Bleedfest 2004
By Syn
Blood flowing
Down
Down
Down
Dripping
to the floor
Let's mark it above the door
I want a Passover tonight
In this religion delight
I want a sacrifice
Let's end my life
Let's play around tonight
Til we get it right
We could have so much fun
Doing deeds til they're done
B L E E D F E S T 2004
Til I lie dead on the floor
What do you say?
No RSVP required
Just bring your favorite knife
and help me cut tonight
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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Tuesday, July 13, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Bleedfest 2004"
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A former member wrote:
this is very good
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On Friday, August 6, 2004, DarkWolf
(415)
wrote:
ahh, blood.. this is an event we would love to attend... delicious, frantic feeling from this one.. hysteria meets blood lust and empty death. Very cool. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
Syn, this was a delight...I would definitely organize an event like this, among friends. Except why does it have to end with you being dead? Why can't it just be one huge kinky sexfest?
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On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
L M A O
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On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
This made me laugh. A lot. I doubt it was meant to be funny but... boy was it. Great. -Glass
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On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
I was trying to not necessarily be funny...But make it a "sporting event" for lack of a better term. -Syn
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On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Um...cutting = bad. This poem = bad. Let's all eat rainbow Sherbert and laugh at old people.
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On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Can be it be Roocky Road instead? BTW, if you have read my previous stuff you will know I'm not a cutter :D -Syn
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On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Eww, Rocky Road is nasty, and it makes me think of the Goonies. HEY YOU GUYSSS!!!! And I have, and I know ;) It's just this, was funny.
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On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
Man, I really liked Rocky Road, til you reminded me of that, and that ugly one eyed thing or one eye bigger than the other thing...ewwww. Goonies..ick -Syn
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On Tuesday, July 13, 2004, scorpionstale
(21) wrote:
Interesting, sounds like the masochist's holiday. Easy to get entangled in this write. I enjoyed it.
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A former member wrote:
Very, very interesting, Nice write.
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